Monday, 8 October 2012

Pitch


11 comments:

  1. I like the idea of a fairytale, however do you think this has been overused with lots of remakes of little red riding hood in the cinema, and other fairytales this year?

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  2. It's a long and quite complicated story, so you might want to think about cutting it down a little bit and making it simpler and easier for the audience to understand, but otherwise it's a good idea.

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  3. Really like the twist on the classic fairytale, I feel you could really experiment with it and add that mysterical side, have you thought about locations and actors ect? x

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  4. This is a really good idea, it has a lot of detail in it. Have you thought about how you are going to be able to explain it all in the 5 minutes? Also when are you going to set this film? Is it going to have modern costumes or something set back in the 1800's or something?

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  5. I am a lottle bit confused as to where the plot is going - I think however a rendition of a fairytale is interesting. How will you organise props/ costumes - such as the werewolf - how will yo do that? I think it will take a lot of planning but you will be able to pull it off well - it's really creative!

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  6. Really like the idea, I originally wanted to follow fairy tales but ended up going down a different route.
    Have you thought about characters that will fit with what you want and do you have props/costumes readily available to yourself that will help?

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  7. A very well thought out idea. You have clearly thought about it a lot, which is great! Whilst you were explaining I could really see your idea evolving. You have a lot of subtext which is good and will keep the audience guessing, i believe its much better when you dont spoon feed the audience.

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  8. Great idea. Liking the use of an old story but with a twist, it has been done before but I don't think it's ever been done in such a way as this, which is a qwerky twist. I can't really fault it, but do you have any ideas of the casting for the short?

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  9. I love that you've gone against the usual concept of Red Riding Hood and focused more on one object rather than a person. Are you sure that you're going to be able to successfully hold a narrative using a cloak as the main feature though?

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  10. I like the idea of referencing Little Red Riding Hood, because you'll have some pre-made context for your character.

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  11. Nice idea. However isn't Little Red Riding a little overused? what other ideas will you combine into this to make it different to the others? Also, isn;t it a lot to tell in one film?

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